Unit 4: Fundamentals of Academic Essay Writing
23 Creating a Rough Outline
Preview Questions:
- What is a rough outline? What information does a rough outline include?
- What is the purpose of writing a rough outline? How might it be helpful for you?
Introduction to Rough Outlines
You have been reading and taking notes, developing a broad understanding of the topic. You should have some sense of how to answer your research question. As you read, identify the “answers” (evidence) to your research question. Create a rough outline to organize your ideas.
A rough outline is an early plan for your essay. It is not final. It helps you organize your ideas before you start writing paragraphs.
A rough outline usually includes:
- your research question (RQ)
- the focus of your research question (for example: cause, effect, comparison)
- the main answers to your research question, expressed as a short list, grouped into categories
Example Rough Outline
Research Question: Why do people become addicted to social media?
- Focus of RQ: Causes
- Answers to RQ:
- Social validation
- Fear of missing out (FOMO)
Technique for creating a rough outline: Brainstorming a list
- Review your reading notes and highlighted ideas in your articles.
- Write your research question at the top of your page.
- Brainstorm a list of 10-15 words or phrases that answer your research question.
- Group similar ideas. Look at your list and identify ideas that seem to go together. Label groups of words with a different number. (In the example below there are four categories, so each answer has been labeled 1, 2, 3, or 4.) Each number corresponds to a category.
- Name your categories. Choose a short phrase to describe each group.
- Put your outline away. Look at it later with fresh eyes. Is there anything you would like to change or add?
Note: You will continue to refine this rough outline. It will help you write your thesis statement and your detailed outline, and it is likely to change as you explore your topic.
Example: Process for Creating a Rough Outline
Step 1: Choose a Research Question: What makes a good university?
Step 2: Focus type(s) – choose one or more.
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- cause
- effect
- comparison
- definition
- classification
- process
- argument
- problem and solution
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- libraries with print and digital collections 1
- computer labs and tech support 3
- small class sizes 2
- luxury dorms 1
- exercise facilities 1
- lots of choices for classes 2
- diverse student population 4
- many different types of clubs and organizations 4
- professors with good degrees 2
- modern research lab facilities 1 and/or 2
- ability to access course info on phones 3
- top ranking business program 2
- high quality ESL program 2
- course management system (Canvas) 3
- opportunities for internships 4
- volunteering opportunities 4
- good cafeterias 1
- study abroad programs 2 and/or 4
Step 4: Categorize: Analyze the list and group similar ideas together into categories. Put numbers next to each item designating its category.
Step 5: Then identify a word or phrase to describe each category. List the categories as 3-4 supporting points in a rough outline:
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- Category 1 – modern campus facilities
- Category 2 – high quality instruction
- Category 3 – technological support for student learning
- Category 4 – opportunities for student growth and development
Step 6: Write a tentative thesis statement. Limit your supporting points to the three most important (for a 5-paragraph essay) or the two most important (for a 4-paragraph essay).
An attractive university typically offers high quality instruction, technological support, and opportunities for student growth and development.
or
An attractive university typically offers high quality instruction and opportunities for student growth and development.
Key Takeaways
- A rough outline is a first plan for your essay, not a final version.
- It includes your research question, the focus type, and main answer categories.
- Writing a rough outline helps you organize ideas and see how your evidence fits together.
- You create a rough outline by reviewing sources, brainstorming ideas, and grouping similar points.
- The categories from your rough outline later become body paragraphs.
- A rough outline helps you write a thesis statement.
- It is normal for a rough outline to change as you read more and think more about your topic.