Integrating my Mentor’s Feedback

Listening

Recently, I listened to another segment of Parlons-en using the following strategies. After listening to the segment, I responded to these two questions posed by my mentor (originally in Lingala). I wrote up my responses and went over them with my mentor. Below is a sample of of how I incorporated the some of feedback I received from my mentor (in green) after completing the listening activity.

Writing 

Recently, I wrote a letter to a friend in Lingala. To write this letter, I relied on my notes and two dictionaries I have to help me when I wasn’t sure of what words to use. After the completing the letter, I sent it to my mentor and we worked on it remotely. Below is a sample of a letter I wrote in Lingala.

Below is a sample of how I incorporated the feedback I received from my mentor (in green) after doing a writing activity.